The silence recoils
just after a robin’s chirp;
like fading ripples
after pebble strikes the pond
on a windless summer day.
The silence recoils
just after a robin’s chirp;
like fading ripples
after pebble strikes the pond
on a windless summer day.
“recoils and robin’s chirp” really work as well as the juxtaposition of recoil and windless…
Many thanks Doug, appreciate your comments. 🙂